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Nice Intro

The track is nice. But there are some voice leadings that needs to be tend to. At some parts they intend to clash in a way that is not very pleasant the ear.

The idea is there. So I will give this track a 7 stars.

MrKennedy123 responds:

Thanks for the review. I agree that at a few points [the strings] there are some odd sounds for a second or two that sound really bad. I'll try to fix that.

Very Good Melody line

The melody is very moving. It doesn't have a dull moment for it is like it is singing and very free. The only thing to be consider is the range of the instrument you are writing with. For this composition you can review more on the Strings and Flutes. What are their ranges, what range does it perform the best?

Overall track is great. So I give you 9 stars for that. Keep up the good work!

Deathwalk responds:

Thanks, I did notice screeching of the instruments when they were in strange octaves.

Blessed!

Thank you for sharing this wonderful song. It's a blessing to be able to hear this song. Thanks again!

TommyUlysesGrant responds:

I really enjoyed Singing this.

Thank you

Hip!

This wonderful track expresses Hippy and bluesy feeling that I'd love to hear in jazz music. How I love to hear those sounds! It's so earthly and gives me a great feeling.

Great job! Keep up the good work!

ProudAardvark responds:

Thanks so much!

Melancholic

It was a pleasure hearing it. It is flowing and very melancholic. Very suitable for a moment of silence and meditation. I enjoyed it! What I like about this work is that It will reach people who doesn't have high music literacy. which is good. Because I believe that music must be direct into an audience. Only a conceited person will compose music that he and only he will understand.

Nice work overall! Keep up the good work!

broove responds:

I myself am not from the high music literacy. That's why my songs are mostly simple. Thanks for a great review ;)

The Drums is not PUNCHY enough.

I like the breaks, and scratches in this track. It shatters out the monotony and gives an interesting color and effect. However, the Drums are not punchy enough to support the overall track. The way I hear the track is the Drums has the prominent part to play. So it must have a quality that will boost all the elements of the track.

Over all the track was Great except for the Drums. So I'm giving it a 9 stars.

JoeyKeys responds:

Thanks for the review, I have a lot of trouble eqing the drums so they lead the song, but it doesn't peak.

Need more polishing but it has shape already.

I don't like rap music because of they're content and the way their makers represented it into the public. almost all of the rap music I heard is all about hatred, anger, racism and rebellion.

Music is very influential especially to kids nowadays especially rap music. Everyday the kids will listen to them and got influenced by it. I think it will be better if they got something to listen to that has meaning and can be a better influence for them like what you did in this track.

The whole idea is there and it has shape already. However, the vocals need some polishing. It doesn't sit well in the track and it is poorly executed.
All of the elements of the track are absolutely fine except for the vocal part.

Blasphem-E responds:

Haha, the vocals do indeed need more work

I'm engaged in creating, writing and performing musical ideas.

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